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188bet金宝搏滚球-英语写作怎样才能拿高分?
人气:965    发布时间:2017/11/22

三年的高中生活给自己印象最深的并不是最后的结果,而是在追求目标慢慢提升自己的过程中得到的成就感。它会给你自信,给你自我肯定,相信只要踏踏实实,找对方法,就可以得到改善,达到想要的高度。在这里,跟大家分享一个我自己的故事。


高中头两年并没有意识到自己的英语作文水平有多渣,毕竟所占的分值较小,总共10分而已。然而一到高三,30分的作文一下子将自己的弱势暴露出来(新高考作文分值上升为40分了)。每次模拟考后,英语老师都会把22、23分好的作文展示给全班同学,当时多么希望自己的作文有一天也可以被写进老师的ppt中。然而现实却是,每次只有18、19的得分。最受刺激的是一次普通的日常模拟考,在前面客观题扣分全班最少的情况下,还是因为作文拉后腿,与最有可能的一次第一失之交臂。在此之前,每次作文得分低,我总会安慰自己没有发挥好,并不是水平低,下次一定可以写好。而在此之后,我不得不面对现实,承认英语写作的不足,决心弥补上这个漏斗。


于是,每次英语老师的作文展示课件我都会下载下来,一遍遍的分析并学习其中的优秀作文,将好词好句摘录下来。并且经常去翻看自己抄录的佳句,甚至将它们背诵下来。也会询问一些作文好的同学英语写作的方法。在做英语阅读题时,不仅仅是要提高阅读题的正确率,在完成阅读问题后,将文中值得学习的语句摘录到准备的本子上。另外,周末的时候会选择五年高考三年模拟上的一个作文题进行练习,尽量用到自己所学的一些句子与短语,争取在30分钟内完成,之后一遍遍地修改,考虑换用更好的表达方式。周一上学的时候还可以拿给英语老师批改,询问修改意见。


同时,由于写作是一个主观题,卷面非常重要,因此我还开始练习单词的书写,虽然不能在短时间内将自己的书写水平提高一个层次,但是可以根据老师欣赏的字体进行学习并总结。譬如,个人认为在写作的时候,将每个字母写的清晰,每一个圈儿尽量画标准,而不是潦草的一笔带过,每个单词之间留有适当的间距,这样写出来的文章依旧可以给人留下一个认真踏实的印象。


当然,在刚开始的时候可能看不到成效,甚至觉得自己付出了努力依旧没有得到回报,尤其是在询问老师自己的作文得分时,得到的是与上次作文相同的答案,沮丧是难免的。但心态很重要,我始终相信,如果真的想要做成某件事,只要自己付出的努力足够多,最终一定可以实现。学习,智力是一方面,但是更重要的是意念,相信自己可以学好的信念。在刚开始背诵作文摘录本上的句子或者短语时,会出现这样的情况:已经背出了,但是在考试写作的时候一片空白,毫无头绪,想不起背诵过的内容,更别提应用了。这其实是看得还不够多,练得还不够熟练的原因。其实在背诵的时候可以适当思考该短语或句子可以用在哪种情况下。熟能生巧,自有其道理。


故事的结局应该可以猜到,在努力积累一段时间后,老师展示的ppt上开始出现自己的名字,直至几乎每次都有,甚至是最高分。

其实,高中每一篇英语作文都是有“套路可循”。开头、过渡、对比对照、原因、举例论证、预测趋势、建议措施、承接转折、总结论点、文章结尾这几个方面几乎涵盖了所有的文章得分点。


学会了这10大黄金句式,再也不怕作文不会写,高分手到擒来!


一、文章开头句式


1. When asked whether it is advisable to look for friends online, different people may have different things to say, but personally I don’t think it is wise to do so.


2. Here comes the question: should universities allow students to live off campus? My answer is positive, for indeed there are several advantages of off-campus living compared with dorm living.


3. Nowadays chatting online is growing in popularity among the youth. Some get fun; some get friends; some even get fame. However, we should not let these benefits blind us to the problems it may pose.


二、过渡概括句式


1. When it comes to the problem of homesickness, here are a few tips for freshmen.


【扩展】As far as …is concerned/ As for…,+主句


2. As the “imported” festivals become hot, our own native festive occasions is on the decline.


3. Before answering this question, I want to remind you of a story of ancient China… This story simply proves the importance of teamwork: united, we succeed; divided, we fail.


三、对比和对照句式


1. Some hold that this experience would give them the edge in future competition after graduation, while others argue that it might hinder their academic pursuit.


2. Different from selling our own belongings in the flea market, running a shop requires careful consideration and preparation in many aspects.


3. At college, our main task is to acquire knowledge; our main trial is to do well in various exams. But at work people are expected to shoulder much more responsibility.


四、说明原因句式


1. The main reasons why I am not in favor of making friends online are as follows.


2. The first reason to avoid comparing yourself with others is it makes you unhappy.


3. Being aware of their parents’ financial difficulty, they used various means to support themselves and managed to save every penny they could for the family.


五、举例论证句式


1. Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating dormant potentials. …A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, the Chinese Helen Keller.


2. Take Liu Xiang for example, who won the gold medal in the 110 meters hurdles of the 2004 Olympics, which had been the first gold medal for Asians in the Olympic track and field.


【扩展】Let me cite …as an example./ A good example is that…


3. It means my success is your failure. If I obtain my goal, then you don’t obtain yours. It is best exemplified by a match in which individuals or teams strive against each other to obtain a goal that only one can ultimately achieve, such as a tennis or football game.


六、预测趋势句式


1. In fact, the development of both Internet technologies and web-based education has made it convincing that one day online learning may replace the traditional classroom teaching.


2. The advantages of online learning compared with classroom teaching make the substitution of the latter by the former almost inevitable.


3. Because of its advantages in creating a virtual but realistic classroom, and providing diversity, convenience and freedom, online education is quickly taking in many territories that once belonged to traditional classroom teaching. In a certain sense, it can be said that online education came, has seen and will conquer.


七、建议措施句式


1. Though learning can be made interesting, it is not play in essence and we should take each class seriously. Thus, there are some dos and don’ts for us to help a class go smoothly.


2. Besides, to minimize students’ possibility to substitute others’ works for their own, several simple strategies can be followed in designing writing assignments.


【扩展】Besides, to release academic pressure, you can take the following suggestions into account.


To prevent these from happening and to travel smoothly on the information superhighway, you should observe some basic rules of netiquette.


3. Maybe you are perplexed about how to get rid of it and enjoy a more pleasant and rich college life? Here are my opinions about how to cope with financial, academic and emotional problems.


【扩展】When it comes to the problem of… here are a few tips for…


八、承接转折句式


1. Of course there is some truth in those complaints. Nevertheless, with regard to the future development for both employers and employees, advantages will far outweigh disadvantages during a job interview.


【扩展】There is some truth in…, but…/There’s an element of truth in… but …/There’s a great deal of truth in what they say, but …


2. It is true that interview benefits both the employer and employee in many cases, but, in my opinion, it does not always work because of its time limit, the subjectivity in decision-making and high additional expenditure it brings to job applicants.


3. Admittedly, looking good does have real advantages in some occasions like finding a job or spouse, but plastic surgery alone cannot change our life.


九、总结论点句式


1. In my view, effective measures are called for to solve the problem. First, it should be made clear to the whole society that Chinese is one indispensable part of our culture and race. Second, schools should attach more importance to the teaching of Chinese. Third, students should enhance their awareness of the importance of mastering their mother tongue.


2. Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, we have to admit that a well-designed name can help a person to some extent. On the other hand, we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person’s fate.


3. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure.


十、文章结尾句式


1. Addressing these issues is not a luxury that can be postponed until a more convenient time. It is a short step from dishonesty in schools and colleges to dishonesty in business.


2. Only when we treat plagiarism as seriously as it deserves to be treated, will we accomplish the first step toward the elimination of various forms of unethical academic behaviors on our campuses.


3. To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves.一、文章开头句式


1. When asked whether it is advisable to look for friends online, different people may have different things to say, but personally I don’t think it is wise to do so.


2. Here comes the question: should universities allow students to live off campus? My answer is positive, for indeed there are several advantages of off-campus living compared with dorm living.


3. Nowadays chatting online is growing in popularity among the youth. Some get fun; some get friends; some even get fame. However, we should not let these benefits blind us to the problems it may pose.


二、过渡概括句式


1. When it comes to the problem of homesickness, here are a few tips for freshmen.


【扩展】As far as …is concerned/ As for…,+主句


2. As the “imported” festivals become hot, our own native festive occasions is on the decline.


3. Before answering this question, I want to remind you of a story of ancient China… This story simply proves the importance of teamwork: united, we succeed; divided, we fail.


三、对比和对照句式


1. Some hold that this experience would give them the edge in future competition after graduation, while others argue that it might hinder their academic pursuit.


2. Different from selling our own belongings in the flea market, running a shop requires careful consideration and preparation in many aspects.


3. At college, our main task is to acquire knowledge; our main trial is to do well in various exams. But at work people are expected to shoulder much more responsibility.


四、说明原因句式


1. The main reasons why I am not in favor of making friends online are as follows.


2. The first reason to avoid comparing yourself with others is it makes you unhappy.


3. Being aware of their parents’ financial difficulty, they used various means to support themselves and managed to save every penny they could for the family.


五、举例论证句式


1. Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating dormant potentials. …A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, the Chinese Helen Keller.


2. Take Liu Xiang for example, who won the gold medal in the 110 meters hurdles of the 2004 Olympics, which had been the first gold medal for Asians in the Olympic track and field.


【扩展】Let me cite …as an example./ A good example is that…


3. It means my success is your failure. If I obtain my goal, then you don’t obtain yours. It is best exemplified by a match in which individuals or teams strive against each other to obtain a goal that only one can ultimately achieve, such as a tennis or football game.


六、预测趋势句式


1. In fact, the development of both Internet technologies and web-based education has made it convincing that one day online learning may replace the traditional classroom teaching.


2. The advantages of online learning compared with classroom teaching make the substitution of the latter by the former almost inevitable.


3. Because of its advantages in creating a virtual but realistic classroom, and providing diversity, convenience and freedom, online education is quickly taking in many territories that once belonged to traditional classroom teaching. In a certain sense, it can be said that online education came, has seen and will conquer.


七、建议措施句式


1. Though learning can be made interesting, it is not play in essence and we should take each class seriously. Thus, there are some dos and don’ts for us to help a class go smoothly.


2. Besides, to minimize students’ possibility to substitute others’ works for their own, several simple strategies can be followed in designing writing assignments.


【扩展】Besides, to release academic pressure, you can take the following suggestions into account.


To prevent these from happening and to travel smoothly on the information superhighway, you should observe some basic rules of netiquette.


3. Maybe you are perplexed about how to get rid of it and enjoy a more pleasant and rich college life? Here are my opinions about how to cope with financial, academic and emotional problems.


【扩展】When it comes to the problem of… here are a few tips for…


八、承接转折句式


1. Of course there is some truth in those complaints. Nevertheless, with regard to the future development for both employers and employees, advantages will far outweigh disadvantages during a job interview.


【扩展】There is some truth in…, but…/There’s an element of truth in… but …/There’s a great deal of truth in what they say, but …


2. It is true that interview benefits both the employer and employee in many cases, but, in my opinion, it does not always work because of its time limit, the subjectivity in decision-making and high additional expenditure it brings to job applicants.


3. Admittedly, looking good does have real advantages in some occasions like finding a job or spouse, but plastic surgery alone cannot change our life.


九、总结论点句式


1. In my view, effective measures are called for to solve the problem. First, it should be made clear to the whole society that Chinese is one indispensable part of our culture and race. Second, schools should attach more importance to the teaching of Chinese. Third, students should enhance their awareness of the importance of mastering their mother tongue.


2. Personally, I believe that both sides have something right, so we should not go to extremes. On the one hand, we have to admit that a well-designed name can help a person to some extent. On the other hand, we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person’s fate.


3. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure.


十、文章结尾句式


1. Addressing these issues is not a luxury that can be postponed until a more convenient time. It is a short step from dishonesty in schools and colleges to dishonesty in business.


2. Only when we treat plagiarism as seriously as it deserves to be treated, will we accomplish the first step toward the elimination of various forms of unethical academic behaviors on our campuses.


3. To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves.